diff --git a/src/pages/index.astro b/src/pages/index.astro
index 8b75810..a1d4026 100644
--- a/src/pages/index.astro
+++ b/src/pages/index.astro
@@ -41,13 +41,12 @@ const indexItems = [
 
   <main class="home" data-layout="stack">
     <section class="intro">
-      <Eyebrow>Engineer · Sydney</Eyebrow>
+      <Eyebrow>engineer errant · Sydney</Eyebrow>
       <h2 class="statement">
-        I make small,<br /><em>careful</em> things<span class="accent">.</span>
+        Deliberate work.<br /><em>Restless inquiry</em><span class="accent">.</span>
       </h2>
       <p class="lead">
-        Software, tools, and the occasional mark in ink. A quiet corner of the
-        internet — mostly writing, sometimes shipping.
+        Software, pondering, and the occasional ink mark in my quiet corner of the internet.
       </p>
     </section>